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Metaphor

in Uncategorized on 27/03/12

There should really be an eraser or two, I think as I sit down to eat my blueberry muffin. The girls, having already devoured their chocolate chip muffin, head to the chalkboard to draw.

Our neighborhood Whole Foods has redone its cafeteria section, adding smaller tables and bright colored chairs for kids. There’s a bookshelf with a few books in it, and a chalkboard, thus creating what I believe is a perfect cafe experience for parents with young kids.

Except the chalkboard is filled with past markings, scribbles, beginnings of sentences and half finished pictures. Where will my girls draw? How will they see the marks they’ve made? Perhaps they won’t even bother to pick up the chalk because they assume there is no room for them.

I think to pick up a napkin to wipe a space but stop because Harper’s making “vroom vroom” noises.  I look to see her pushing chalk along the long lines as though they are race tracks and her piece of chalk is a car. Hadley joins in and the girls race from one side of the board to the other.

I sit and ate my blueberry muffin while they color inside loops that were created earlier from lines and swirls. And after they explore the chalkboard awhile they find a place among the other children’s creations, adding to what was made with uniqueness only Hadley and Harper can bring.

“It doesn’t matter what you do, …. so long as you change something from the way it was before you touched it into something that’s like you after you take your hands away.” -from Fahrenheit 451

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  1. Kelly@Beyond the Big Red Barn says

    March 27, 2012 at 10:21 pm

    Great post! Love the quote at the end. I am continually amazed at kids’ imaginations. They take the simplest of things and create whole worlds. Being a “Type A” I always have my own ideas of how things should go, but when I let them take the lead, I end up learning just as much as they do. 🙂

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    • calliefeyen says

      March 28, 2012 at 7:47 am

      I love that quote, too. I probably use it more than I should. 🙂 And I agree, I’m always amazed at what kids come up with!

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  2. Patrick Ross says

    March 28, 2012 at 9:29 am

    I agree with Kelly. The quote is a perfect reflection of the wisdom your children demonstrated.

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    • calliefeyen says

      March 28, 2012 at 9:33 am

      Thanks, Patrick! It’s a favorite of mine since high school.

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  3. alison says

    March 28, 2012 at 9:59 pm

    i love that you let yourself take time out of the busyness to make these observations. and i love your girls. and your whole foods isn’t bad either. 🙂

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    • calliefeyen says

      March 29, 2012 at 6:33 am

      You know I learned all that from you, Alison!

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  4. Tiffany says

    March 30, 2012 at 3:06 pm

    Our kids are constantly teaching us things, aren’t they?

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    • calliefeyen says

      March 30, 2012 at 5:23 pm

      Amen!

      Reply

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Hi! I’m Callie. I’m a writer and teacher living in Ann Arbor, Michigan. I write Creative Nonfiction, and in my oldest daughter Hadley’s words, I “use my imagination to add a bit of sparkle to the story.” I’m a contributor for Coffee+Crumbs, Off the Page, Makes You Mom, and Relief Journal. My writing has also been featured on Art House America, Tweetspeak Poetry, Good Letters, and Altarwork, and in 2014 I was one of the cast members of the Listen To Your Mother DC show.

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